Story Beats

Here are what I believe my story beats to be so far:

1. Wide shot: fade in of campsite
2. Camper sleeping inside tent
3. Fade in to spider in background, moving towards camper
4. Spider crawls onto campers arm, quick zoom in to see spider bite camper
5. Zoom in to spider AfterEffects shot: spider rotates while it's name and attributes are typed out on the screen
6. Zoom back to spider, and quick shots of camper crying out in pain, ambulance, hospital lights
7. Cut to venom flowing into blood stream, to respiratory system; AFX shot of lung and list of symptoms camper is experiencing relative to breathing
8. Back to blood stream/venom, zoom to AFX shot of muscle and symptoms camper is experiencing relative to muscular system
9.Back to blood stream, quick cut to anti-venom being injected into camper, then show medicine flow through blood stream
10. Quick shots of camper lying in hospital bed and heart monitors, zoom in on camper's closed eye
11. Pull back on eye, eye opens, reveal camper back in his tent
12. Camper looks relieved, pull back to reveal shadow of a bear outside the tent.